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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-13 07:35 PM


You are a mere person
That I begain to know
You are some what like me
We have a friendship
Sort of more
But we know
We care for others more
So we continue
As friends never more
Kinda

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-13 07:59 PM


Oh Neala, the goddess of sadness and her sad poems.  This was sad.  It is sad when you can't be with someone because the circumstances are beyond your control. I know.
(HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-13 09:45 PM


very nice Neala, I like the way you always make a emotional statement in so few words,
yet its always a complete thought...I guess I'm too "long winded" to be this brief with my words..(smile)
this one reminds me of that OLD song...
"if you cant be with the one you love---
love the one your with"... sometimes good things develop when your not expecting it
take care, janet marie

 In the time we've known
That we each are a part of one another
We've lost as much as we have won...
And as our lives have grown
We have found that it only brings us pain
To hang on to the things that we have done...
***Still I love the times you've come***

Jackson Browne



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