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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-11 09:33 PM



Your fire burns to ash in my dangerous soul
I now feel the pain of that stare
The wind of the dark mountains haunts me
The icyness of your heart moves me
That heart yerns to take control of my mind
I scream but there is nothing
The scream was too sincere
The pain of my throbbing mind is too much to bare
The voices are never calling my name
The willows always a deafining siclence
This is all never to change...


 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-12 12:06 PM


Tan Angel,
this is excellent, so well written and expressed, you captured many emotions in this one. very nice work.
take care,
janet marie

 ...found your heart-then lost your lover...licked your wounds then run for cover...
take your time...there will be another...
and dont make the same mistake twice...
unless you can pay the price...
Dan Fogelberg



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-12 12:54 PM


Well written, sensitive, well thought out all up well done!~!  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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