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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Does it matter? Wake up each morning I check my mail... It’s been over 20 days... You haven’t said a word...of meaning to me... This pain keeps growing from deep inside... Somehow I ‘m not waiting for you... Strangely a question resides in my soul Doesn’t it matter...? All the long walks...? To hear my voice...to listen to me... To know if I merely exist or am I doing fine? The rest is now...too much to ask... Our past is but a fading memory... The cliché is true...that life goes on Still the heart ponders...and alternates with every beat Doesn’t it matter...? We counted the stars...and all those years...? When tomorrow comes...I’ll still be wondering... While you just walk out...like before... You took me for granted...to many times... But I’m not waiting for my turn... I’m still in a state of total...shock... Don’t I matter...at all?? < !signature--> you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday... Avanti Rao [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 02-10-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Walking in similiar shoes, AVANTI, I can only give you the answer, "God, I Hope So." Great poem, can feel the sadness behind the words. Michael |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
The past makes us who we are. Everything matters. Every little bit of love we give or receive makes a difference. But you expressed very nicely the despair we feel when it doesn't seem this way. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW Avanti...thats 2 beautiful heartfelt poems today... you must be inspired... ahh sweet inspiration...I'll take it when ever it comes...most the time our BEST work comes from our heart's pain, but I'm always grateful to be able to channel it into something creative. This one is very good too. janet marie ...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found... it will all be gone when you turn around... cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway... Rick Roberts-Windmills |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thakyou for reading... encouraging me... as always... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Still the heart ponders...and alternates with every beat Doesn’t it matter...? We counted the stars...and all those years...? I think everything matters to our hearts. I hope you will find some comfort for your longings. Jennifer |
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