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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Your spiteful worlds come down on me with a sting like freezing rain I stand before you helplessly A pawn in this cruel game You build me up to break me down I pray for this to end But you keep on relentlessly Finding pleasure in my pain I've come to lose myself in you Nothing left to gain And as I turn to run away I realize I will never be the same Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Great poem danni. This sounds like a very destructive relationship that is benefiting no one. You painted this picture very vividly. I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Mistikman-thanks much for your comment. No, one like that doesn't benefit anyone. I got out of it, but not soon enough. The scars run deep. Anyway......thanks again!  Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another exceptional poem from danni... loves lessons are always learned the hard way...at the expense of our heart... janet marie ...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found... it will all be gone when you turn around... cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway... Rick Roberts-Windmills |
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