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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Living in modern times, the innocence of children fades fast. The arrogance of adolescence soon settles in. Next, the cynicism of adulthood replaces that arrogance. In this world, this reality, torture runs rampant. Sorrow is a feeling everyone knows. Happiness is rare, and people use others every day. What kind of world do we live in? It is a horrible mes... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Uh huh!- Sometimes it can seem like a horrible mess. Sometimes I feel like my life is torture. Or some kind of punishment for a former life! but I doubt it! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I agree with Bronx...I feel the same way sometimes. Well, this is great!! Not that you feel this way. But the poem. "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Venus maybe a good title for this poem would be uh...let me see....how about "a horrible mes". I'm sorry Venus I know you didn't ask. There are some good things happening too, right? Or is life all bad? Sometimes it seems that way to me, but not most of the time, and certainly not all the time. James |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
it certainly is a mess. but there is good too. a good piece and great flow. enjoyed very much. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
The most bothersome thing to me is that "the innocence of children fades fast". We can not longer protect them because we cannot control the world (environment) that they are in contact with each day when not in our presence. Your right, it is a horrible mes, but we overcome by trying to be the best we can be, and letting our children see us trying. Good expression in this piece. Danny |
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