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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Once upon a time I loved you and you loved me. How and why did it end? It was all so sudden... so many years went by, yet still I loved you, unknowingly, and you loved me. Finally the day came, when we met again, but our fairy-tale life was gone. Once you were my Knight in Shining Armor, but now that armor is rusty and dull. How can we retain our fairy-tale life? ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
not all tales have happy endings. someday a knight will appear with armour much grander than the one before.  Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
fairy tales live in our poetry... another great poem Venus!! janet marie "...she said I dont know if I've ever been good enough...I'm a little bit rusty...and I feel like my head is caving in, and I dont know if I've ever been really loved- by a hand thats touched me, and I feel like somethings gonna give...and I'm a little bit angry... Well...this aint over..NO not yet...not while I still need you around"... matchbox 20 |
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gypsyqlt Member
since 2000-02-08
Posts 147Bradford,Vt USA |
Oh baby, I know of what you speak !!! Jocelyn |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Yes- I agree with danni. It is better to love and to have...Well you know the rest! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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