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DayDreamer
Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30


0 posted 2000-02-07 09:40 PM


Hidden inside all of us is a dreamworld
A place of fantasy
A haven for the weak
Hope for the strong

Feelings and emotions lie here
In a place of wonder
A world of grace
Full of love

We live in reality
A place of pain
A haven for the dark
Prison for the good

Feelings and emotions die here
In a place of fear
A world of sorrow
Without love

Where are you?


 "You can't change anything by just sitting back and looking at it."~Cloud

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JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-02-07 09:46 PM


Like your ending.

"Where are you?"  I'd rather be in a dreamworld than face the harsh reality of life.  That's why I am gald I have this wonderful thing called imagination, so I don't always have to be living in reality.  

Enjoyed.

Joy

Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
2 posted 2000-02-07 11:46 PM


Were this a philosophy forum I would bring up whether we make our reality, and I do, in fact believe that we at least contribute. But sticking to the topic at hand, I enjoyed this, and I, too like the ending.
Jannel


 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
3 posted 2000-02-08 04:32 PM


I guess the people that posted above, don't have the same dreams I do...sometimes you CAN'T make your dreams a relaty. DayDreamer, I know where your coming from. I would also love to live in a dream. Great poem by the way!!

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-08 06:28 PM


very good poem Daydreamer...thought provoking and expressive...I guess we all live in both worlds some of the time...we need the fantasty to cope with the reality...and both give us inspiration to write.
take care, janet marie

 ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces---
did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still...
and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually...
then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart gave me away"....

Glass Tiger



~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

5 posted 2000-02-08 06:49 PM


I know exactly where you're coming from. Sometimes your body can be in reality, but your soul is in a dreamworld.

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

*She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd*

Lady Bere
Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA
6 posted 2000-02-08 08:46 PM


Great poem.  And if you think about it, how would we survive in this world's reality without our dreamworlds to create in.
Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
7 posted 2000-02-09 05:25 PM


Yes-
Of course I don't quite agree with the emotions disapearing part.  When I dream sometimes there are too many emotions that they...OOOOOH...I've got an inspiration!
I must go now before it's too late!
Petically...
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 2000-02-09 05:36 PM


Being the day dreamer I am, I know how you must have felt writing this poem and a great poem it is.  
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