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~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

0 posted 2000-02-07 05:49 PM

I stand, alone,
in a forest.

I stand, alone,
beneath the moonlight.

I stand, alone,
under the night sky.

I stand, alone,
over the glowing earth.

I stand, alone.
NO one to guide me.
No one to love.
No more pain.

I am happy,
yet sad.

For I am empty,
but that way I will not
feel Pain.
I will not feel the torture others go thru for
Love.

Love has shunned me,
sent me away,
and seduced another to
torture.

Once I too was in love with
Live.
But it mocked me,
and 'twas I that shunned it.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

1 posted 2000-02-07 06:35 PM

I love this poem...no matter how many times I've read it in the purple notebook (the purple one right?)

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

2 posted 2000-02-07 06:38 PM

Liked this, lots of pained feeling, oozing out so to speak, from the corners of each line!

Joy

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-02-07 07:45 PM

I felt the pain too, but I must add don't shun love and life too long, for you may miss something wonderful that only comes once in a lifetime!!

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

4 posted 2000-02-08 04:57 PM

Never give up on those moondreams.
Well written, lots of expression.
DH

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-02-08 06:17 PM

another outstanding poem by Venus!!!
so expressive and well written, never give up on love, life...or writing!!!
take care, janet marie

..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces---
did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still...
and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually...
then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction...
and my heart gave me away"....

Glass Tiger

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