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Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

0 posted 2000-02-05 01:33 PM


I'm Right Behind You

1st Verse:
Sometimes it feels like the whole world around you's crahin' down
And it burrying you,
Sometimes it feels like your in a crowded room
And no one can see you standin' there,
Sometimes it feels like you up against the whole world,
And his brother

Chorus:
But I'll be by your side
Helpin' you get through the tuff times,
I'll be with you
Helpin' you get through
I'll be right behind you
Coachin' you through
Every step you take,

2nd Verse:
I know you and I have been thru some slumps
But we've always managed to get bakc up,
I know we've been friends since forever'
And we've been there for each other for whatever,
I know I need you and you need me
So what is wrong?

Chorus

Bridge:
Sometimes you feel like your loosing a race,
That you think that you just can't win,

Chorus 2x

3rd Verse:
Even though I'm gone I am still with you
"Casue I promised that I would see ya thru,
I am wiating for ya to hurry up
And realize that you can't give up,
I know ya think I am gone but I'm really not,
So what is wrong?

Chorus
Bridge
1st Verse
Chorus 2x

I'm right behind you
With you
Right by you!

by Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


© Copyright 2000 Bronx - All Rights Reserved
danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
1 posted 2000-02-05 05:08 PM


nice song. it's always good for someone to know that there is another to count on when needed.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-06 08:50 PM


Bronx, nice song, you should sell it to TV and it could be a theme song for some new 'Friends' type show.  Seriously..

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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3 posted 2000-02-07 01:13 PM


Is there music for this song?  It's quite good. . .

Good to know that there's always someone who can help you along the way. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

4 posted 2000-02-07 05:16 PM


Hi! Yes...my computer is fixed! Anyway, this is great and I know I've already read it, but it is!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
5 posted 2000-02-07 06:11 PM


Wow-
Well I didn't think it was that good Isis, but whatever you say.  Well, Sven, there is kinda music to it.  There are notes to it just not music yet. ~Venus~ I'm gald to see your computer is up and running yet again.  Thanx to everyone who has responded!
Poetically yours
Bronx

 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


DayDreamer
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since 2000-01-16
Posts 30

6 posted 2000-02-07 09:14 PM


Bronx-  I really like your song! If you have a tune to it, tell me somtime.  Nice to see that there is a little hope for the 'depressed 5.' ^_^  DayDreamer


 "You can't change anything by just sitting back and looking at it."~Cloud

TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
7 posted 2000-02-08 06:21 PM


I feel like the only member of the dp 5 that hasn't respoded so...although I read it before I still like it!!!

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

AVANTI
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
8 posted 2000-02-09 11:55 AM


That's a very lovely song... have you got a tune for it? you should sing it to the one you love
see you around...

 you don't have to understand completely..to love completely...
remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao



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