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Inferno New Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 4 |
For all who believed in me I’m sorry, Although there was hope it is now gone Intentions were good but it no longer matters Leaving your hopes were they should not have gone Unchangeable is the outcome Regret is all that is now felt Escape is now longed for, how do I get out? Inferno |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a very sad and lonely poem...but still very beautiful...sometimes we all feel like hope is fading...but I try to find a glimmer or two in my poetry or someone elses words of wisdom...inspiration comes from hope. take care Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i have felt this way many times. your words capture the feeling well. powerful in so few words. nice work. Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
This is a great and very emotional poem. It expresses the feeling I felt and could never put it into words the mind could understand. "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
A beautiful poem. It is a good description of the way we have all felt at times. |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Hope is rare to come by, isn't it? Well, at least for me it is. But my poetry and acting (another venting area) allow me to express my feelings and thus, give me a tiny, small amount of hope. By the way, for anyone who cares, I am the Prince of Verona in our 'play.' Thanks! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Wonderfully depicted emotion that I know I've felt. Love the first line. Jannel |
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Inferno New Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 4 |
Id just like to say thank you for your comments, tis very kind. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Nice little acrostic, inferno. Welcome to Dark Passions - It's nice to come home to new faces. I hope you will stay with us here awhile. btw - if you ever find that door "out" drop me a clue as to where it is...LOL Michael |
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