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Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

0 posted 2000-02-04 06:23 PM


Piece of Mind

I was sittin' at the bus stop the other day,
When I saw a strange man comin' my way,

He sat down beside me
And he smelled a bit funky
And he told me somethin' I would never forget,

He said
I should give ya a piece a my mind
So you can see why,
Why I look the way I do,

And I said
Get away from me you freak
Your piece of mind is somethin' you can keep,
I don't care why you look the way you do,

'Cause there's some strange things happnin' to me,
And I gotta get home to my family,
Just leae me a lone and I'll leave you alone too,
I don't want anything from you,

And He said, Fine, I won't give you the power,
To look into the destant future,

Then I'll go away,
but there'll be a price to pay,
Then I said somethin' I would never forget,

I said
I guess I'll take that piece a mind,
After all,  what's the crime,
What kind a harm could it do,

He said
It could do a lot a harm
to your old folks back on the farm,
you gotta know how to use it carefully

And there's some strange things happnin' to me,
And I gotta get home to my family
Will your piece a mind help me,
Get me to where I need to be?

Then the man sitting by me did the strangest thing
He reached in his ear and pulled his brian out like a string,
He broke off a piece,
And gave it to me,
And I put it in my ear carefully

And he said
To me, Hey son,
your gonna have a lot a fun,
Just be careful what you use it for

And I said
Yes, sir, I will
I'll never use it to hurt or kill
but how does it actually work?

But he said instead...

There's some strange things happnin' to me,
And I gotta get home to my family,
You'll figure it out someday,
And when you do just come my way,

You don't have to believe what I say,
But I know I've got a new way,
Of looking at...

The strange things that happen to me!

by
Bronx

Can you tell me what this song is about.  And it's not about how a gut meets this wired alien!




 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-04 08:05 PM


Getting in touch with the inner secrets, and if you don't you'll end up like the old man?
Learn and understand the knowledge within?
I'm probably wrong, but that is how I perceive it.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
2 posted 2000-02-04 10:08 PM


   Sorry Bronx I have not the slightest idea

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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