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DayDreamer
Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30


0 posted 2000-02-04 03:35 PM


Whatever happened to "once apon a time?"
Beautiful cities atop a sea of clouds.
Were fantasies and imaginations run rampant,
and you always meet your knight in shining armor.

Whatever happened to that place far away?
A place you once knew, but can not find.
A world you remember, but can never grasp.

Whatever happened to "Happily ever after?"
Finding your true love.
Being together forever in a land of happiness.

Are all of these things gone,
or just out of reach?




 "Keep hope, for a candle in the strongest wind will still give light."

© Copyright 2000 Ana - All Rights Reserved
TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
1 posted 2000-02-04 03:39 PM


This is great! It shows a lot of feelings...I REALLY hope to see more of your work on the boards! =)
                      

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-04 04:15 PM


Very lovely poem Daydreamer... well expressed emotions...hopefully we will all find our "happily ever after". take care
janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-04 06:16 PM


Fairytales are like gossamer silk cobwebs, only you can make them reality.  Wonderful musings here!!~  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
4 posted 2000-02-04 06:25 PM


Nice!-
Fairytales are just that!  Sometimes things go perfect and other times they go horribly wrong!
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
5 posted 2000-02-04 08:26 PM


If life were a fairy tale, we would all live happily ever after.  This isn't the way it is though.  But I wish it were!     



Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
6 posted 2000-02-04 09:14 PM


Ana,
It was a great poem. But I will say nothing about the topic cause I know way to much where your coming from.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

7 posted 2000-02-07 05:39 PM


I too know where you are coming from. I wish upon a star, however broken it may be, that both you and I find our knight in shining armor and our fairy-tale life.  

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
8 posted 2000-02-07 09:02 PM


I wish I knew... (Didn't Cinderella have it all?...) Maybe I just need a fairy Godmother. Beautiful poem.
Jannel

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