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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
"Tangled Web" Lost in a tangled web of words, thoughts, and actions I konw I cannot break free By simply cutting through. I've been too tangled, and nothing can be done "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone." |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Kelly this is beautiful...it uses the perfect way to discribe what so many (including yourself) are feeling! Keep up the great work!!! |
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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
I cannot say I know exactly how you feel, yet I see where you are comming from. I know how it feels to be lost...in fact...I still am. Just keep on writing everything on to paper, and maybe someday, you'll find yourself. DayDreamer "Keep hope, for a candle in the strongest wind will still give light." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kelli, very nice work, full of strong sentiment, and I like your signature verse too, very true. take care janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
KELI...that was short and too powerfull... maybe cause i feel like i'am in one right now your signature...pierced me...right there... so real...beautiful... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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