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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-04 09:13 AM



           I scream so loud I silence myself
           I need no pain killers, I do not feel
           For I am only an illision created by the darkness of my heart
           I do not love
           I do not pray
           I am alone
           Tearing away from myself
           Tearing away from my soul

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Farrell - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 2000-02-04 09:16 AM


I feel this way sometimes...good poem...keep it up okay??
Keli1019
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 31
FL
2 posted 2000-02-04 11:38 AM


This is a great poem. It really describes how many feel at times. I'm looking forward to seeing some more of you poetry, because your poems really express your thoughts and feelings, especially some of my feelings. ;-) Keep it up!!


 "It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone and a
day to love someone- but it takes a lifetime to forget someone."

DayDreamer
Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30

3 posted 2000-02-04 03:26 PM


I know what it's like to tear away at your heart.  Just keep on fighting.  Great poem.  DayDreamer

 "Keep hope, for a candle in the strongest wind will still give light."

Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
4 posted 2000-02-04 05:50 PM


Yeah-
I know how you feel.  Or should I say don't feel!
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-02-04 06:14 PM


I know how you feel too, it's hard to feel crushed under tonnes of twisted metal and emotion.  But you must fight the nothing, and ever strive towards the light and the love.  Email me if you need to talk.
Great poem, enjoyed the imagery  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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