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A Fragment of my Former Self
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A Fragment of my Former Self |
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Inferno New Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 4 |
A fragment of my former self, As empty as a shell A fragment of my former self, Cast down into hell A fragment of my former self, As dark as nights embrace A fragment of my former self, A pitiful disgrace Inferno *I am but a soul trying to get by |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Short, Powerful, and to the point. I like it. Welcome to Passions!  I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Sad but true a lot of people feel this way...Welcome to Dark Passions!! See you around the boards!! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
A very moving poem, Inferno. It made me think a lot.....I like it. DayDreamer "Keep hope, for a candle in the strongest wind will still give light." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Inferno, welcome to Passions,its great to have another talented poetic friend stop in. I look forward to reading more of your work. Take care. janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to passions!! A lovely first poem to post. You are doing what we are all trying to do, get by. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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