Suicide (The Note ; Part II)

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DarkEternally
New Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 3

0 posted 2000-02-04 12:43 PM

Suicide Note

Dear Mom,

Don't ask why's
I know you feel fears
Dry your eyes
Wipe away those tears

Just do me a favor
Find my body nearby
The moisture on my lips, savor
And please don't cry

Tell dad i love him
Tell sister too
Tell them I'm sorry
And tell them, "Family, I love you."

Unaccompanied Love,
Matthew

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

1 posted 2000-02-04 09:11 AM

this is sad =( but good...you dont feel this way do you??

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-04 04:52 PM

both these poems(part1&2) leave me deeply sad,my words fail me. I hope writitng these pieces help you deal with whatever your going thru...our writing can help us heal.
take care, janet marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-02-04 05:45 PM

Suicide is one of life's horror's. I have lost someone to suicide. I saw what it did to his family. Don't do it, not for yourself, but for them. And nothing is as bad that you would need to end your life.
If you do feel this way and need to talk please email me anytime. I'd like to listen hon. If you don't feel this was the portrayl was damned good!!

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

Bronx
Member

since 2000-01-28

Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

4 posted 2000-02-04 06:30 PM

Yeah-
this is a great poem. This place helps us vent and express ourselves!
Poetically yours
Bronx

Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 2000-02-04 07:10 PM

Hey there Me again!! I have learned that writing helps me soooo very much!! This is great that you are getting your thoughts out!! I hope you are doing better than you seem to be!! You do write nicely!! There are a lot of great people here to talk to here at Passions!!

By the way, Welcome to Passions!!!!

Take Care
Bridgette

Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."

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