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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-03 07:20 PM



                             Once
           Once your love was mine
           Now you’re in someone else’s arms
           For you will never know how I truly felt
           Because I was to scared to tell you
           For when you’re telling me how much you love her
           I am the saddest of all skies
          Oh, how I wish I had one more chance!
           Just one more chance to show the real me!
           Maybe I’ll chicken out,
           Turn yellow in the face
           Maybe I’ll make it through
           And earn your heart in return…


 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Farrell - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-03 08:34 PM


Don't you hate that!! When it is too late, for whatever reason.  And no matter what you know you won't win.  Well done TA  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-04 12:14 PM


sad but very sweet poem...regrets of love lost, can make for some of our best inspiration to write... and that can help us feel stronger. take care, janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
3 posted 2000-02-04 03:00 AM


it's never to late ...to love someone...
just open your heart...
your words had humor and were still from deep within...


 

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