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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Lay your head down And close your sweet eyes Dream yourself away from this horrible reality. Dream... Dream... Dream... Keep your eyes closed. Keep dreaming but never forget your reality and me. Dream... Dream... Dream... I want to stay like this For an eternity Cozy in your sweet embrace But never forgetting how to Dream... Dream... Dream... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is great...sweet dreams... I like the reality line...another good one... you've been busy Venus, lots of new posts tonite...ahhhh inspiration...I'll take it when ever it comes...(smile) janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
i like this venus...it was sweet , but with a hint of true passion....keep up the great work... |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Yes!- I've felt like that before. You never want a moment in time to end. It is the single most perfect moment in your life. And you shouldn't and won't ever forget it! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
dream all you want...but don't forget reality... i like that... |
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