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ChainedAngel
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since 2000-01-07
Posts 55
tx

0 posted 2000-02-02 07:26 PM



Some say time flies when your having fun.
Some say feelings are best expressed through poetry.
I say it is time for me to run.
I say its time to hide my dignity.

So I wave my final farewell,
To my fellow poets, my friend.
I wish you all soo well.
Now its the time for my end.

A tear rushes from my eye,
Running down my cheek so softly,
As i look at this farewell and sigh.
Isis, I'll miss you mostly

Cherish my words and keep them at heart,
As i dry my final tears.
For now its time for me to part,
Poets, friends, I've felt I've know for years.

                           Love,
                             Tasin aka ChainedAngel

 There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead

- B. Warner

© Copyright 2000 Tasin Ray - All Rights Reserved
~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

1 posted 2000-02-02 07:33 PM


You're leaving? How sad. We'll all miss you bunches! *sniff, sniff* Bye...

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
2 posted 2000-02-02 11:17 PM


chainedangel:   i wish you didn't have to go... you dont even know me, but i want you to know that i've enjoyed your poetry and if you must go, i hope that you'll return some day soon...

sincerely,
jerome

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
3 posted 2000-02-03 05:15 PM


Ahhhhhhh!-
Well, if you must go then you must go!  but I wish you didn't have to.  I think I can speak for all of us whe I say we will miss you very much.  It's always sad to see someone leave.
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-03 11:56 PM


wish ya werent leaving so soon, seems like ya just got here...hope ya keep writing where ever you travel to now...take care janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



DayDreamer
Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30

5 posted 2000-02-04 03:14 PM


I hate to see a poet leave.  Well, I guess we all move on, right?  Best of luck in the future.  ^_^  DayDreamer

 "Keep hope, for a candle in the strongest wind will still give light."

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
6 posted 2000-02-04 03:30 PM


chained angel
*hugs*  i loved your work and it is sad to see you go.  you have alot of talent.  and i know what you mean by feeling like youve known these people forever.  i feel the same way.  people are so nice and caring here.  it is a wonduful place and it is sad to see you go.     so with a teary eye i bid thee farwell.  may you have the best of luck in all you do.  *hugs*  you will be deeply misseed.


 True beauty is often hidden in darkness...
~Jesse C. Jaymz~

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-02-04 06:21 PM


Chained Angel, what is wrong hon, why are you going?  What is the problem?  Please honey email me and let me know what is going on.  I am honoured you will miss me but why do you have to miss me.  Please let us talk.
(HUGS)  If you do go I will miss you too sweetie.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-02-04 07:55 PM


Honey I'm getting really worried please contact me asap.  Are you ok?

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-02-04 09:10 PM


IMPORTANT PLEASE READ11

AS YOU CAN SEE CHAINED ANGEL IS LEAVING US, I DON'T KNOW WHY AND I'M A BIT WORRIED ABOUT HER.  I HAD AN ICQ ADDRESS FOR HER BUT LOST IT SOMEHOW IN ICQ.  IF ANYONE HAS HER ADDRESS PLEASE CONTACT ME WITH IT IMMEDIATELY SO I CAN CONTACT HER AND FIND OUT IF SHE IS OK.
I WILL CLOSE THIS ENTRY AND SEND IT TO ANNOUNCEMENTS MAYBE SOMEONE READING IT OVER THERE WILL KNOW.  
PLEASE IF ANYONE KNOWS HER EMAIL OR ICQ PLEASE CONTACT ME ASAP.
THANKS
Isis

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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