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kari
Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 2000-02-02 05:31 PM


Growing up in the cold
Wanting to be known
Habits start to unfold
Cause you feel alone

Fighting to get high
Leave the world for fun
As reality floats by
Then smacks you some

It's against the things
You once held to be true
You are lost in the flings
Yet you're never through

When will you see
Go beyond your facts
It is the fun you seek
And the fun you lack

Yours is your own
Life is in your hands
Sit and think alone
Yours is your own

© Copyright 2000 kari - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-02 05:40 PM


For some, all too true.  Well done  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-02 06:16 PM


kari, this is very good, well expressed thoughts and emotions...I feel like this sometimes too,I guess we all do, but its helpful to be able to work thru the feelings as we write.
take care, janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



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