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Walking alone... |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
WALKING ALONE... In the darkest hour...of your darkest night... In your fleeting moments...of your shortest days... In your quietest moments...of your silent prayers... in your every step...of the nosiest streets In your deepest sorrow..of your dearest loss... when you reach above...when you stretch too far... In the anxious moments...of your dreams come true In your sudden horror...on those lonely paths... In the longest hour... of your longest night... In the heaviest steps ..of your thoughest roads... In your every laughter ....of your happiest moment I'll be with you...always... We don't talk about it but ...somebody knows.. When you open your eyes ... and the sunlight's gone... you'll know it's not easy...but you're not walking alone...walking alone [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to Dark Passions Avanti! Great job with this poem...hope to see more of your work.  "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Avanti, this poem is SO very good...I was moved by its expressions... "cause we dont talk about it but...somebody knows"...excellent. Welcome to Passions..another new talented friend comes in...take care...janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Hey- WELCOME!! This poem is very good. Sometimes walking alone is the best thing you can do...I hope to see a lot more of your work! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish" |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A very nice poem Avanti and welcome to Passions. |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Welcome- I loved the poem. It was very thought provoking. Thanks for making me see the light. And once again WELCOME! Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to our family of friends. Avanti, I loved this, poetic wisdom I'd call it. You offered up and shared all these feelings with us, well done!! Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thankyou all of you for your encouragement and for extending a warm welcome too it has helped me more than you know... you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions and you have mail |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thanx Ruth...I'll check it ... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
A good one, it get's 5 howls, I only go to 5. Joel. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
 joel i did'n want you to howl..and not 6 times...see ya around... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very good Post Avanti So very close, going to send it as an ecard! Great Job The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Avanti~ this is excellent!-SEA |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
thanx sea... and Dhuron...what can i say... I'm  taht someone will use my poem on a card...If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Great poem! I was surprised to see that some of the comments were welcoming you to DP, but I'm not surprised that it's still up here! Great job. shadow Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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