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~Venus~
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-02-01 07:09 PM


They say I'm the one with no problems.
If only they knew...

Knew all the horrors I've seen,
I've been through.

Knew all the torture...
all the pain.
Emotionally, physically.

So.

I wonder where that perfect life is?


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

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Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
1 posted 2000-02-01 07:24 PM


Good-
No one has the perfect life.  No one is perfect and we all have problems.  Now I know that we both no each other personally and just because I haven't disscussed any serios problems with you doesn't mean I don't have them.  Everyone has problems and if someone doesn't then they are missing out on some important life lessons!
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-01 08:22 PM


Venus,
this is very expressive and good,and
if ya happen to find the answer to the perfect life question...E-mail me...cause I'd sure like to know too...(smile)Stay strong, take care, janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
3 posted 2000-02-01 09:25 PM


Hey, great poem! It is SO true! Nobody probley knows the true you, but that doesn't mean to stop disscousing your feelings no matter how bad or terrible they may be...

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"

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