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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-01-31 07:57 PM


Throught life we go and fight
For the good
Defend the hurt
Work for the hopeless
Defend the inosent

We stand alone
In the world
We are nothing short
Of those things

© Copyright 2000 Rachel Parrish - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-31 08:06 PM


Neala, this poem is great...so much said in so few words... a profound statement, I love the closing thought.I have been reading all your new poems here..you have been both inspired and busy...great work.
janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-02-01 12:08 PM


Profound indeed well done Neala!

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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