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Dark Poetry #1

Flames

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-01-31 07:49 PM

Old flames die out
When pain is lost
Hope is gone
Mercy has left us
And all life is gone
But
We can always make new flames

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

1 posted 2000-02-01 07:18 AM

I liked this very much. In a few short lines you've described the sad hopelessness of a flame gone out and the promise of yet another fire to come if we only allow ourselves the chance.

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

2 posted 2000-02-01 05:33 PM

Hey, this is great...although the feelings that u had to feel aren't. Nobody should have to feel them...

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