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Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.

0 posted 2000-01-31 07:07 PM



I have things I wish to tell you,
I have things I wish to show you,
I have things I wish to share with you,
But how?

I have secrets I wish to tell you,
I have secrets I wish to show you,
I have secrets I wish to share with you,
But how?

So many feelings are bottled up,
But if I let them out things could go wrong,
I want to be able to be conscience free,
And not worry about what people may think,

I know that you love me just like all my friends do,
but will you stick by me if I...

Tell you things,
Show you things,
Share things with you,

Tell you secrets,
Show you secrets,
And share secrets with you?

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Bronx
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since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
1 posted 2000-01-31 07:09 PM


Ok-
before anyone says anything the topic is supposed to be Expressions not Espressions.  Ok, now I feel better!
Poetically yours
Bronx

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-01-31 07:59 PM


Bronx,
I have something to tell you too(smile)...
Welcome to Passions...and I really like this poem...your really gonna like it here...
janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-02-01 12:06 PM


Welcome to our happy family of friends Bronx.
Liked this poem a lot, but you know telling secrets isn't the way to earn someone's love or friendship.  Of course you do!!  If you have any problems or questions please feel free to email myself. Welcome  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
4 posted 2000-02-01 07:06 AM


Great poem and a question I often ask myself when I contemplate stepping forward in trust.
Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
5 posted 2000-02-01 04:37 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions Bronx...very nice poem...hope to be seeing more of you.  

 "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience."
-Gandhi

~*Angel of Darkness*~



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
6 posted 2000-02-01 04:55 PM


Hey, I like the poem...You know any of ur friends will listen. I know they will, all u got to do is tell. We all have secrets. Bye bye. I hope u know who this is...

                         -TanAngel

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

7 posted 2000-02-01 06:14 PM


I'll listen...

good poem...

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
8 posted 2000-02-01 07:20 PM


Wow-
I never thought I would get this much feed-back on my first poem.  Thank you to everyone that has responded and will (hopefully) respond.
Poetically yours
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!

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