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hathor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-01-30 07:56 PM


Thoughtful sounds
found all around
sounds of pain
fear and agony
heard from screaming
mouths of the young

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poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
1 posted 2000-01-30 11:12 PM


hathor: this one brings the image of concentration camps to mind *shivers*... disturbing...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with the radiation suit

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-01-31 07:48 AM


Your poem brought tears to my eyes  It brought to mind all of the children who scream out - whether aloud or in silence.
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
3 posted 2000-01-31 01:17 PM


Agreeing with Jerome on the shivers. Interesting that you describe  childrens' screams as "thoughtful sounds."
Jannel

hathor
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 17

4 posted 2000-01-31 06:38 PM


Jerome-
When I wrote this I wasn't thinking of concentration camps.  I was thinking of the pain that me and a close friend of mine go through everyday.
-hathor

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