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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-01-30 07:17 PM


my heart yearns to be free
and it seems the only way
to do so
is by taking my own life

but then I think of the
Pain...

is it worth it for the release?
for the happiness?

would anyone miss me?
...no, probably not...

my heart years to escape
this cold, cruel world

does yours?


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-30 09:06 PM


we all feel this way sometimes...hopefully we can heal while expressing it in our writing and stay strong...there will always be someone who misses us, someone who cares...a friend once told me..."love your self and you heart is free...love your self first and others will follow"...
she was right.
Take Care, Janet Marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-30 11:35 PM


Honey we all yearn to be free of life's pain but suicide isn't the answer.  There are people who would miss you friends, family.  Life matters, love matters.  It is not loved ones that make our lives, but the loving them that does.  Look around, you have enough love to sustain you.
And like Janet Marie said vent here in passions that helps, it does (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

3 posted 2000-01-31 06:09 PM


Thanks you guys! I realize suicide isn't the answer, but sometimes (like when I wrote this) it seems really tempting.  

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
4 posted 2000-01-31 06:50 PM


Ahhhhhhhh!  No!!!!!!  Don't do it!  Just like that cat there killing yourself is not the right thing to do!  If you ever feel like that again call me(you know who I am) and I'll save you and everyone else the pain a sorrow of your demise!

poetically yours
Bronx

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