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Magic Boat

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Safwan Arekat
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since 01-29-2000
Posts 38
Bahrain


0 posted 01-30-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Safwan Arekat   Email Safwan Arekat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Safwan Arekat's Home Page   View IP for Safwan Arekat


Magic Boat

Dream on lady what you please
and a lonely soul why don’t you tease?
for that is all you’ll ever find
A dream to dwell in a lonely mind

A heart so lost and torn in pain
so close on by to pass again
I hear you weep, and suffer deep
and wither and wane in a golden chain

NO !

That is not what I see
That is what YOU have chosen to be !

IN YOUR MIND


Oh ..dearest dear…
I do not belittle your torment
to dismiss your hurt
for it is all you see,
and it is all you hear
My dearest dear…

Though it might seem to you now
that I’m a brat and brute
A bad rude dude
for not buying your line..
especially after you poured forth your heart
wide open for me
by giving away your hearts hidden key

But really ..
I am a good and wholesome dude
who tells it like he sees it
on the faintest chance
that you set yourself free
for no one else can do that

ONLY YOU

See..

I have been there before you

on that cross I mean

I am still there

Yet I am in Heaven !

How can that be ?


JUST LISTEN TO ME :


Come ride My Magic Boat


Safwan Arekat http://magicboat.com

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JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


1 posted 01-30-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Safwan you offer a nice style of poetry here and also a web site with a book.   Looks like lots more reads for the future.  I enjoyed the comment on your opening page "Oh,...the obsession is gone/but herein dwells its spirit."  Enjoyed the part I read so far.   James
Safwan Arekat
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since 01-29-2000
Posts 38
Bahrain


2 posted 01-30-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for Safwan Arekat   Email Safwan Arekat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Safwan Arekat's Home Page   View IP for Safwan Arekat


Thanks James. Enjoy the rest.


safwan
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 09-06-99
Posts 6390
Sunny Queensland


3 posted 01-30-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Firstly welcome!!  Your work to me is reminisent of Jim Morrison's.  I really enjoyed it  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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since 11-07-2003
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4 posted 11-07-2003 11:21 PM       View Profile for THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Email THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for THE-1-U-DISLIKE

very nice

is it about poja phat!!!!!!
furlong
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since 04-08-2001
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5 posted 11-24-2003 03:11 PM       View Profile for furlong   Email furlong   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for furlong

oops
THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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6 posted 12-01-2003 03:25 PM       View Profile for THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Email THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for THE-1-U-DISLIKE

ya
i think that it is about here
coz he love here so much
THE-1-U-DISLIKE
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7 posted 12-01-2003 03:42 PM       View Profile for THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Email THE-1-U-DISLIKE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for THE-1-U-DISLIKE

ya i am sure that it is a bout here
coz he love here soooooooooooo much
 
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