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Auricom45
Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 19
Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-29 02:19 PM


Children songs gone wrong
Oh where, oh were has my joy gone?
Somewhere over the rainbow, far along
I'm singing in the rain, cold
Whistling while I work out the folds
Mary had a little boy
Had a baby at age 16, get the toy
The candyman, no one is safe
Society can be decived, walk out in strafe
Twinkle, twinkle little star
Have I gone, oh so far
There once was a farmer, had a gun e-i-e-i-o
Pulled the trigger, no more fun e-i-e-i-o
The wheels on the car go round and round
Childeren never ever found
Go to sleep, find your dream
Having ever lost everything



 That strange feeling we had in the war. Have you found anything in your lives since to equal it in strength? A sort of splendid carelessness it was, holding us together.


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-29 06:10 PM


Well said, if only life did turn out like children's songs or fairy tales.  Alas, reality is much more vicious.  Great thoughts here.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-29 06:11 PM


If you don't mind I might borrow this theme soon?  Let me know?..

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Auricom45
Junior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 19
Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A
3 posted 2000-01-29 06:59 PM


I don't mind if you take the theme. I'm always up for sharing ideas, so go right ahead!

Auricom

 "We have bigger houses and smaller families; more conveniences, but less time; we have more degrees, but less sense; more knowledge, but less judgement; more experts, but more problems; more medicine, but less wellness. We have multiplies our possessions, but reduced our values. We've learned how to make a living, but not a life."

summer
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa
4 posted 2000-01-29 07:38 PM


This was fun and sad and true all at the same time i liked it alot...keep up the good work.
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