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Auricom45
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since 2000-01-25
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Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-29 02:17 PM


Invisible
You won't see me
Staying to see your anger
You won't see me
Holding this grudge any longer
You won't see me
Cry my tears
You won't see me
In so many years
You won't see me
Fighting all your battles
You won't see me
Telling you that it matters
You won't see me
Living a lie
You won't see me
To say goodbye
You won't see me
Hiding in the darkness
You won't see me
To see a boy so worthless
You won't see me
To take my last breath
You won't see me
So solve of what's left



 That strange feeling we had in the war. Have you found anything in your lives since to equal it in strength? A sort of splendid carelessness it was, holding us together.


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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-01-29 03:18 PM


Powerful emotions here...good job!
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-29 06:13 PM


So sad, you are feeling down today, right me if you need to talk.  I am here if wanted.
(HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-01-29 08:59 PM


You WON'T see me NOT replying to this great poem.  
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-01-29 09:37 PM


this poem is so good..strong in emotions and
your message... I really like the way you ended it too. Take care, Janet Marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



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