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Done asking why....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-29 12:13 PM

are you done asking why
theres so much to know
but we have quite a ways to go
if you lead me to the morning after
can that prevent more disaster
for the see through soul
the place i save..where nothing will ever grow

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-29 12:38 PM

this short poem speaks volumes...
very deep..very good.I really like the last lines...and I thought to myself...from your soul..this poem grew. take care, Janet Marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-01-29 06:06 PM

Very well done. But I do believe more beauty can grow in the soul again. (HUGS)

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

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