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baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2000-01-29 12:28 PM


It is peace away from reality
It is ones way to vent anger
And yet another’s way to remember happiness
They say what dare not be said
Show what dare not be shown
Our little secrets drip out
A sweet nectar like no other
Riddles upon riddles
Many look for the meaning
Yet only one knows for sure


baerlon

This one really does not belong in dark passions but i thought you people might enjoy it.  It is about what we all came here for "POEMS" and the fact that everyone claims they know what a poem means but truely the only one who knows is the writer.  We all have differnt expirences that lead us to diffent conclusions. Which is perfectly fine as long as you enjoy it.

Thanks for reading

© Copyright 2000 Jason M. Mays - All Rights Reserved
Wendy Flora
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 182
Virginia
1 posted 2000-01-29 12:20 PM


Love it!  Loveitloveitloveit!   -wen

 "I am everything you want
I am everything you need.
I am everything inside of you
That you wish you could be
I say all the right things
At exactly the right time
But I mean nothing to you
And I don't know why."
-"Everything You Want"
Vertical Horizon

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-01-29 12:27 PM


baerlon,
I really like this poem...and you are right...we all read our own experiences and feelings into the poems...and only the author truly knows its deepest reasons...but for me..that is the real gift of both writing my own-- and reading others works...as both-- helps us heal and give us strength, and gives us each others wisdom to learn from these "lessons of life".
I like this poems message...
"They say what dare not be said
Show what dare not be shown
Our little secrets drip out
A sweet nectar like no other"
very well said. Janet Marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-01-29 12:33 PM


True words spoken here!  Very, very, true!  
So enjoyable, baerlon!  

baerlon
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
4 posted 2000-01-29 10:35 PM


Thank you all I am glad you enjoyed this for that is the reason i posted it.

baerlon

For we have crossed many oceans
And we labor in between
In life there are many quotients
And I hope I find the mean
(Creed)

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