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Auricom45
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 19
Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-28 08:35 AM


Fake People
What do you see?
Who are you acting as?
What do you want to be?
What is it that you have?
Who are you to tell me what I do?
Ain't you the one being the copy cat?
Why try to make the stew?
Why try to be all that?
What do you get from impressing everyone?
What do you get from impersonating?
Can you see that I am by one?
You know you are not good at imitating?
Trying to be the big shot?
Want to make the people like you?
Ain't you the one getting dropped?
Trying to hard to have the good?
Trying to take up a style?
Is it how style is at this time?
Wanting to act all hostile?
Why are you trying to be so divine?
Have you ran out of luck?
Wanting to be so fly?
Did you get stuck?
How much time went by?



 That strange feeling we had in the war. Have you found anything in your lives since to equal it in strength? A sort of splendid carelessness it was, holding us together.


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Mario21
Junior Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 11

1 posted 2000-01-28 09:59 AM


This is a good show of how fake people can really be and how this world puts on a front just to make other people happy. I say this if you can't make other people happy by being yourself then you don't need to make them happy but only yourself.
Osiris
Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 20

2 posted 2000-01-28 04:13 PM


don't let the fake one steal who you are

you expressed this well

[This message has been edited by Osiris (edited 01-28-2000).]

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-01-28 05:59 PM


Well said!  People who lie and fake.  Will they ever learn?  If we listen we give them strength, if we ignore them they do eventually weaken.  Just like fabled monsters, and that is what they are.  Don't let them get to you.  Do as I do, pity them.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



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