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Passnot Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18 |
This giving night Pleasure’s dreams Can such tranquillity be trusted? Taking steps in darkness She holds his hand Can such kindness be trusted? Falling on his own fault Deeper the replies of support Can such sympathy be trusted? Neverless the struggles of death Reaching upon this light with great anticipation Answers upon unrequested questions Crash near the safe shores Broken arms of security Patiently waiting for wings or horns I ache for my past’s moments I cry for my future’s dilemmas |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
isnt this a quick reply very good poem enjoyed it much Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Pass, this one is amazing...I missed it yesterday... Im so glad I found it today...very beautiful piece of work.Janet Marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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