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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-01-27 07:44 AM


Enchanted Locomotion

Got a feather masked lover
in black leather
waiting to dance in my Freak Parade.
Hold painted smile entering my charade.
Got the devil twisting and turning
to the strangest desires burning.
Step freely into forbidden emotion
screaming through enchanted locomotion.
Venture into the mist of my Freak Parade
to wittness what exists in my droll head.



 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-27 11:14 AM


a-alibaster,
this is very good, the poem has a great rhythm to it as you read it...I love the opening verses...and you show courage in your writitng...speaking of these things we all think about but dont always know how to express. Thanks for sharing. Janet Marie

 ..."She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it."
Matchbox20

Osiris
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since 2000-01-27
Posts 20

2 posted 2000-01-28 04:56 PM


reminds me of the mardi gras .... jester
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