Red eclipses the means to your end...

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Red eclipses the means to your end...

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-27 02:21 AM

ive bled a line or two for you
it goes and comes
red eclipses and combines
with life
to make them want the reject
with no feeling too
siding with all the hateful things
just to prove the means to an end
the open daggers..my insides exposed
can be your meaningless excuse..
and your only friend

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-27 11:27 AM

this poem effected me...it is excellent...I love the opening line...thanks for sharing it...Take care, Janet Marie

..."She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it."
Matchbox20

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

2 posted 2000-01-27 04:13 PM

"I've bled a line or two for you" and "siding with all the hateful things" are both great lines. Loved this.
Jannel

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