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Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

0 posted 2000-01-26 11:51 AM



questing for uncertainty
longing to be lost
dreaming of the pleasure
of being numb to the pain

Amnesia :    
     erase my soul

Forgetfullness :  
     cleanse my being

Sleep :
     defy my consciousness

emptiness is bliss




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fc
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 130

1 posted 2000-01-26 12:57 PM


wow you captured this so perfectly, I have forgotten how many times I have been there....sigh
poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
2 posted 2000-01-26 07:30 PM


jannel: can't say that i agree with the sentiment, but i do understand and the poem is beautiful...    hope to read more of your stuff soon...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no soul

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
3 posted 2000-01-26 08:03 PM


I'm not a morbid person, Jerome, I promise! But sometimes everything hurts so bad that you want to forget everything and start again. Thank you both.
Jannel

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-01-26 08:38 PM


I can understand Jarrel (HUGS)  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
5 posted 2000-01-26 09:57 PM


jannel: believe me, i understand... that's why i like the poem    i just hope you dont feel like that too often *heh*... keep up the good work...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no soul

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

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