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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2000-01-25 10:47 PM


Sitting at home
I am all alone
With no one to see
Or call on the phone
Slowly I die
While my soul heaves a moan
Feeling my heart
Transforming to stone

I think of a love
Who now is a stranger
My heart pounds inside
And warns me of danger
I meant her no harm
Nor to rearrange her
Only wishing to love
And not wanting to change her

There once was a time
She brought me such joy
Not knowing that I
Was merely a toy
She accepted my heart
So smug and so coy
Yet now it's my love
That she will destroy

And now in the end
It's all clear to me
That I was a fool
And had failed to see
That her love was a game
And not meant for me
So I'll leave her alone
And that's how it will be

Turning away
With nothing to say
Having to face
Another dull day
How many more dues
Must I now pay
To have a pure heart
Be cast out my way

G.A. Webb


© Copyright 2000 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-26 12:22 PM


Beautiful Again GAW!!  
Wonderful thoughts and feelings shared so beautifully  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-26 12:36 PM


P>S>  Wonderful Imagery as well. A poet indeed.  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
3 posted 2000-01-26 09:12 PM


Thank you Isis. I've always thought that I was the only one who thought the way I do. But sense I've been in Passions I found that not to be true. Everybody has welcomed me with open arms which gives me the feeling of belonging. That means a lot to me andI just wanted to say thank you to not only you Isis but to everybody here. Thank you all! You are wonderfull people and I mean that from the bottom of my heart!

G

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-01-26 11:51 PM


Honey you are welcome   (HUGS)

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-27 05:10 AM


Geeeeeess I want in on this moment LOL
GA I too found the same as you did.  I thought poetry and feelngs were just somthing I did. I felt a little strange but oh my gosh I was wrong.  I truelly enjoyed this poem and what you can bring to this place.  I'd give you a hug but I dont want to weird you out LOL ah so what here you go ((((HUGS))))

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-01-27 06:28 AM


Very nicely written G.A.  Yep, it looks like you fell in Love all by yourself.  I've done that so many times its not even funny anymore.
Now I'm looking for a mutual attraction
to bring me satisfaction.  James
                                

  

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
7 posted 2000-01-28 01:46 AM


This was a very good poem. Sad..but still good.  Whatever type of woman you had is the same kind that gives the good ones bad reps. This is also the type that makes it more difficult for those good ones you're looking for when you find them.

 Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-01-28 02:04 AM


OK so no one feels left out (HUGS) all round  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Osiris
Junior Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 20

9 posted 2000-01-28 04:27 PM


well done GAW

better another dull day than to be used

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