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Buddha
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since 2000-01-25
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0 posted 2000-01-25 10:05 PM


Pain
Washing over me like the bleeding rain
Leaving its horrible stain
Try to wash it out but it still remains

Hot searing pain
My heart it maims
Burning, tearing, shrieking
At what my heart has been seeking

I'm not afraid to die
Only to try
The pain is so strong
Especially when you're wrong

Leave me alone
How much longer must I roam
In unison with the sea's groan
Pain causes me to moan

© Copyright 2000 Chris - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-26 12:34 PM


Welcome again Buddah.  I really liked this piece and can totally relate.  Well done  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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