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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-01-25 05:04 AM


Comeing out of the darkness
My past shrouded in deep fog
Unseen for the most lonely
In a world past and forgotten

It returns to haunt me
A past which i know not
A past hidden in lies
Speaks out to me now

It tells me of my sins
How I made my friends
And lost then crying
Past floods into present

Remember your pain
Whispers the night
You deserve to remember
You will feel the pain

Cold hands on my throat
Tighten their grip
Stealing my breath
REMEMBER YOUR SINS< !signature-->

 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd


[This message has been edited by Walter Poe (edited 01-25-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-25 10:34 AM


this poem moves and effects me.It is very well written and has captured the emotions we sometimes dont know how to express. Yet you express them with grace. Janet Marie
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-01-25 07:04 PM


Whew! Makes me afraid to be alone. Nicely done!
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-01-25 07:14 PM


Walter another beauty!  I'm beginning to think you know something we all don't?  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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