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ARCADIA
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since 2000-01-12
Posts 23


0 posted 2000-01-24 11:06 PM


So what everyone thought...
Needless worry as you lay naked
Among the sheet of sorrow
Displayed at another victims feet
So what everyone said...
What was right
Though made you
STARK MAD
Raving with blazed fury
Of what could of been
Should of been
SO so beautiful
And now you sit in awe
And wonder...
Wonder why you are so bare...
Wonder how to clothe your soul...
Your mind...body?
Exposed for all to judge...
But what the don't see
Is YOU

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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-01-25 12:26 PM


I think we tend to shy away from showing our true souls....except perhaps in our poetry. I like the way you write.
ARCADIA
Junior Member
since 2000-01-12
Posts 23

2 posted 2000-01-25 12:48 PM


Poet deVine...yes...we do hide...behind an image that was ortrayed by society...what people can't understand we tend to judge and cast away...peotry is our soul..written out in words..still so powerful because hidden is who we really are. thankyou for your reply

 

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