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nirvana
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since 2000-01-24
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0 posted 2000-01-24 08:57 PM



                 Bite the Bullet
Sucking on a loaded gun
Master of my fate
Gazing into vacant dreams
Encompassed by the hate
All alone in an empty chair
Slowly sinking down
Stomach sick and turning
The doctor's out of town
Little dancing Prozac
In puddles bright and red
Now I lay me down to sleep
Overdosed on lead.

Nirvana

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ARCADIA
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since 2000-01-12
Posts 23

1 posted 2000-01-24 11:17 PM


Nirvana...Deep... It took me off guard...Powerful...Is this about someone you know?
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-01-25 12:28 PM


Your poem is good..though it scares me to think that someone may actually want to do this...I hope it's not your experience that you write about..if it is, I'm so glad you are past that point...
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