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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-01-23 11:47 PM


Scarlet gently drops
Into a chalice of white
A contrast of worlds
Dark blending with silver hue
In a swirling mirage
Pain softly caresses
The touch intoxicating
Beauty created in misery
The suffering almost sweet.

I revel within the night
To shallow thoughts, ignorant
Wanting to embrace eternity
Without false hopes
To throw me from the path
Of anguish I wish to tread
For life is not true
Without the blood of my soul
Present within my tears.

The crimson laced chalice
Reflects the tattered image
Of a broken soul
Forever sealed from dreams
I embrace my hopelessness
Like an immortal lover
Feeling the flower of my being
Crushed by my own doing
Lost am I
Within the melancholy
Of my wanted solitude.




 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
Dusk Treader
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1 posted 2000-01-24 12:31 PM


I too have spent many a night with my friend misery.  Lucky for me I've had real friends, like yourself to save me from him.   Wonderful piece my friend, an excellent read.     

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons



spiked
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since 2000-01-13
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Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-01-24 12:17 PM


Truely amazing
can feel what is written well
Thanks
Richard

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
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Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 2000-02-02 09:35 AM


As always,
you head right to the core of emotions!
I loved this!!!  


Jenny

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