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Jer
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0 posted 2000-01-23 10:52 PM


Revenge is so cruel
Yet tormenture is worse
So why not play their game
To see how it feels?
Why not kill two birds
With just one stone?
Why not lie once in a while
To save from feelings hurt?
Why? Because everything is just too damn hard
Trying to control yourself
Without getting out of hand
Trying to say you’re sorry
When you really don't mean it
Why bother trying to trust me
When you know you never will?
Everything in your head.......


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Bojopy
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1 posted 2000-01-24 03:07 AM


Wow jer I just thought about this last night... I can never seem to get someone to truelly trust me... I can relate to this... I hope I read it in the right way did I?
Well done!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


Jer
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2 posted 2000-01-24 05:54 PM


Yeah you read it the write way.  I mostly write plesent work by lately I have felt kinda down so.....
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