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Losing More Than Loss
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Losing More Than Loss |
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Passnot Junior Member
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18 |
Losing more than loss Striking pain within my chambers Nights follows with reinforced sorrows I give no thought about tomorrows When last visited grieve Time giving to more hurt With flowers upon the holy dirt At last my trip is coming to an end Halted by my soul's dying passion I try to give more to my eye’s vision Looking back to steps long taken Age gives only sight on the past I deny my destiny’s end til the last Hollow are forgotten wounds Contained in my emotion’s memory Caught upon the drift of life’s symmetry Did my tears run dry of yesterday’s cry? Balance turns the tides of tears Loathing expectations and discerning glorious fears 9/12/99 |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
Did my tears run dry of yesterday’s cry? Balance turns the tides of tears Loathing expectations and discerning glorious fears i really like this part. it reminded me of something i desperately want to forget. anyway, it's an excellent poem. good work! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Passnot, this poems is so very good, I have felt this way so many times, but you have spoke the emotions so gracefully.thanks for sharing this.JanetMarie |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
Very good. I really like this. One touch of nature makes the whole world kin. -William Shakespeare |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Wonderful vision of emotions here. Welcome to our family of friends. I'll be looking for more of your work soon  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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