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Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391


0 posted 2000-01-23 03:54 AM




this will be different for me i usually right such thoughts down first..but here it goes!

Time is trivial
      and time is moving on
Which way did I go
      and where am I withdrawn

Nothing is coming
      and begining to numb
Those heroes within
      are sucking my brawn

Why must I think this way
Why must I sink in these says

Trusted and defide by
      the unseen Lord
Working by not working
      to find those adored

Hoping in the ways
      of biblical means
Searching nowhere without!
      to find it in dreams

What happened to the forgotten soul
What happened to my abaddoned whole

Why must I fall
       into it all
Why must I fall
       without his call

What....What must I do???
To get back within you???  


Oh lord come to me again
I have only one true sin

I am only alive
      and will die
But why must I
      sit in this depression
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CRY
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I apologize for making anyone read this but I feel alone wtihin.  Not because of love but because of faith....and I just had to write about it...off the top of my head!!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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armanca
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
1 posted 2000-01-23 04:02 AM


Bojopy...

My faith is growing weary these days.  And that scares me.  I liked this poem.


Carman

moshpit
Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143
cebu, philippines
2 posted 2000-01-23 07:28 AM


i am glad that somebody has written about faith.  we all need it. and sometimes it's the only thing left to cling to. i thank you, bojopy, for sharing such a poem.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-01-23 06:05 PM


Faith and hope the light of all lights.  Honey so sorry you feel so down, you naughty man you  should've emailed ME!!  Please remember I'm always around to talk to ok?
(HUGS) hope you feel better by the time you read this response  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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