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mojar
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since 1999-11-09
Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 2000-01-22 10:23 PM



prisms

i look to the sky, and see the sun,
shining it's brilliance and hue.
not a cloud in sight,
only the image of you.

i find myself lost in prisms of light,
always looking for the peace.
peace that comes from within,
not knowing from whence it comes.

a voice carries on the wind,
whispers to me to calm my fears.
reach for the strength of the light,
cease the mournful tears.

my tears flow an endless journey,
bound unto the sea.
will i ever find myself,
and know this is really me.

mo.

© Copyright 2000 mojar - All Rights Reserved
poetry_kills
Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans
1 posted 2000-01-22 11:33 PM


mojar: this is simply captivating... i absolutely love it... i wish i could capture the golden quill that penned this...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no brain

 A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
2 posted 2000-01-23 09:57 PM


absolutely beautiful mo!
Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-24 02:54 AM


MO this was an excellent read... It has a truth within us all I think at times... I can relate to this... clap...clap...clap on this one well done!!!!!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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