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hathor Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17 |
So quick to dismiss our young fragile bliss not knowing who I am will make things better secrets will keep me alive as long as they stay secrets between us. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Simple, true and thought provoking  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is a very good poem...I like its statement and the feeling I get from it...it has a mysterious quality to it...and I just love secrets...(smile) take care,Janet Marie |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Short, but much feeling. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
hathor: very good work... i'm honestly impressed... the poem is shrouded in mystery and allows the reader to interpret it themself... i like that... sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Again, excellent poem. I can relate to having secrets...and I have plenty! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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