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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-01-22 02:18 PM



Court is in session.
Walls inhaling the tension
Condeming voices screaming my sentence.
Tearing gapping holes in my existance.
Judging my every sin,
Killing any humanity I may have held within.
"We now pass down your sentence
for your immoral existance
and your resistance...
Walk the path of hell
locked in your own private cell,
fighting your inner demons endlessly.
to relive the dieing of your soul, eternaly!"


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-22 09:12 PM


I hope no one in the world ever gets a sentence as horrible as this.  Well done  
But watch the spelling   DOn't take it personally just trying to help  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-01-22 10:47 PM


Thank you and not taken personaly at all...
I get far too ahead of myself when typing and in the end have spelling errors galoure!
I write here at the comp usually so nothing gets put on paper first...just a personal flaw I guess.....Sorry that I do not check as I know I should.
I am glad that you like my words and can still enjoy it even through my errors!
Thank you once again....


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

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