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summer
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

0 posted 2000-01-20 06:27 PM


It can taste like the sweetest berry
or sour as vinegar..It will make you feel
full of unconditional happiness or a sickness
near death..You sip it slow at first, then
indulging yourself completley sometimes not knowing
when to yeild..It will take away your pride, and
leave you standing  naked..Forbiden secrets come to light while lost in this wine..The truth from withen will soar once you have tasted it..There are many types of wine some stronger than others just as there are so many ways to love someone..

Why is love like wine ? Sweet with a hint of pain..


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brandywine
Junior Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 19
Illinois
1 posted 2000-01-20 06:31 PM


All I can say is...how very true.......
Brandy

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-01-21 01:46 AM


Clever and well done  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


JD
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
N Prov
3 posted 2000-01-21 12:01 PM


well done

JD



 Everything Dies



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